KnightravenStudios

It haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaappens, okay? What can I say, you guys are not only my test audience, but my TARGET audience. It's not that I don't have anyone else to talk to, I just choose you guys because you're awesome. :D So... the meeting with my editor a couple weeks ago went well. But I think it broke me. lol. Not in that "sad, tragic, oh-my-god-I-can't-write-anymore" way. But she taught me a LOT, and I'm SO excited about how much better of a writer I can be, that I've been obsessing over everything she's taught me! The problem? When I read my stuff now, I see sentence structure and mechanics (the things she worked with me the most), not context

I'm working at Applebee's, minding my own business after pulling a double on prom night, dead on my feet, when my last table of the night cheers me right up. A four-top, this family reminded me of everything I loved about my family back home. They were playful, friendly, sarcastic, and maybe even a little eccentric. After noticing I have some of my concept art for my novels covering my Server Book, the woman of the table asked to see it, and I explained to her the pictures depicted characters from a novel series (Lankora's Legacy) that I've been working on. She then began to ask me a series of questions most do not bother asking when they